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"Sometimes I forget you exist"
"::raise eyebrow:: huh?"
"When you're away...I forget...that...uh..."
"...that you have a girlfreind or that I am she? " Cocks head to the side::"
"::nods:: aye....sorta...kinda...::cringes::"
""::furrows brow:: oh. Um. Gee, thanks?"
"::small Smile:: aww...come on now!"
"What? Am I supposed to be happy you forget about me?"
"::rolls eyes:: aww...come on. You know what I meant!"
"::shrugs:: I guess. Like...forget small things like scent or facial expressions?"
"::nods:: sorta. It makes seeing you...."
"....all the sweeter? I understand. :smiles sweetly and nods:: I understand"
"::smiles:: yeah. Get out of me head babe. ::wink::"
"awww....but it's cozy in there, like your arms ::smiles::"
"So...::nods and winks:: when do I get to remember you again?"
"::raise eyebrow:: huh?"
"When you're away...I forget...that...uh..."
"...that you have a girlfreind or that I am she? " Cocks head to the side::"
"::nods:: aye....sorta...kinda...::cringes::"
""::furrows brow:: oh. Um. Gee, thanks?"
"::small Smile:: aww...come on now!"
"What? Am I supposed to be happy you forget about me?"
"::rolls eyes:: aww...come on. You know what I meant!"
"::shrugs:: I guess. Like...forget small things like scent or facial expressions?"
"::nods:: sorta. It makes seeing you...."
"....all the sweeter? I understand. :smiles sweetly and nods:: I understand"
"::smiles:: yeah. Get out of me head babe. ::wink::"
"awww....but it's cozy in there, like your arms ::smiles::"
"So...::nods and winks:: when do I get to remember you again?"
This was written as a Voice Poem for my poetry writing course. Instead of doing spoken voice I thought it would be best to work with a more modern form of communication and see if a voice poem works from there. Thusly I chose to work with IM conversation. As I know this is a way that many lovers keep long distance relationships working, as I am currently working with mine, then I thought it would be a good way to get a romantic poem as well. Anyway. Yeah. It isn't traditional poetry. There we have it.
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The last line is very clever! It's very unconventional, but still communicates strong emotions, and it's somewhat heartbreaking.